My favourite day of my Holliday


My dad my mum my aunt my little sister and big sister all went to the 12 apostles ,It was a great day we saw so many cool things like thunder cave, cliffs awesome greenery ,caves and rock formations.

It was so fun but we got really hungry and the trip home took 4 hours.


One thought on “My favourite day of my Holliday

  1. G’day Jacob,
    My name is Rian Prestwich and I am a uni student who will be checking in on your student blogging challenge and inviting you to a conversation. Feel free to reply and ask me questions if you’d like.

    How lovely that you all went to the Twelve Apostles together, it sounds like it was a great day.

    When you are listing people, objects, places or ideas it is always best to use commas. Next time you list something, try writing it like this:

    “My Dad, Mum, Aunty, Little sister, Big sister and I all went to…”

    Best of luck with your next student blogging challenge, make sure you check back in regularly!
    – Rian

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